For those of you who are interested, here is what I cut from the book in my
After my book was accepted by the publisher, I took another year to go through it and edit it. I figured I could polish it to my best, then the editors could bring a higher shine to it.
I am glad I did because I found some glaring errors. Fro example, in Chapter 10, Noah was a farmer living out in the fields in tents. The next day, Noah was living in a house with Grampa Methuselah I had to think hard to resolve that problem.
Frankly, the book was too long, so I looked for places to cut. Chapter eight, the pool was one place, although it contained some important concepts. I include it here.
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